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Sunshine
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0 posted 2006-10-25 09:50 PM



Fall Sails

It wound around
that part of me
where therein lies
near sympathy
covered in honey’s
empathy
yes it wound around
that part of me

it is
what she does

I think [not near enough,
they say]
of me
that self
oh,
I

when, then, fate decried
just be.

Drum, thrum, knots
cringe light and
strike wet skies
for some twine more
on some another
DNA’s shore ~

this, scalloped, me.

Wonder, muse,
score and sieve
clasp thinned fingers
in worry’s eve
as secrets come and
go to grow
when pondering draws
one’s dusky leaves

and fingers come a turkey’s tale
when bearing, inward,
sets some sail;
when holidays
on horizon’s bear
and currants are a berried
tale.

I would this gift of
wander, wear
to shred the fabric
of the thread

unweave the pattern
of some sin

then gather you
to me again.

Fall does this to me
in spades

and spring, when bloom’d
might bring roses
grave.



© Copyright 2006 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
Martie
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1 posted 2006-10-25 11:11 PM


Sissie

Wonder, muse,
"score and sieve
clasp thinned fingers
in worry’s eve
as secrets come and
go to grow
when pondering draws
one’s dusky leaves"

coming to this endend of day, is good this way.  

Earth Angel
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2 posted 2006-10-25 11:14 PM


"Fall does this to me
in spades"

~ and that's a beautiful thing!!!

Love and Sun Light,

Linda



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3 posted 2006-10-26 01:04 AM




"when, then, fate decried
just be."

ahh
you bring sunbeams
late at night
dear Karilea

just being is sometimes
difficult...
and so necessary




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Deep in the heart
4 posted 2006-10-26 11:35 AM


There can be no sin in sincerity.
Lovely write.

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Klassy Lassy
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5 posted 2006-10-26 08:38 PM


In the hollows of summer's grave
the chant of greening voices
tryst in gold and crimson wist
the patterns of love's choices...

Lovely, Sunshine

ThisDiamond
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6 posted 2006-10-29 02:06 PM


Since fall is the dwindling before sleep, I found myself thinking of those past, and knowing a deep prayer left my lips.
TD

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7 posted 2006-10-29 07:46 PM


Yes Dear Sun....the time is growing much
closer to that moment of the year.  Not
just a turkey shall be stuffed that day..
No pun intended...

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