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kif kif
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since 2006-06-01

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0 posted 2006-09-07 11:02 AM

I hold the fussing and fighting in my gaze...decayed, like stagnant water from the mangrove trees. I can't drink that, I will dash that back to the green---I swallow clean.

I am the tribal Queen, hear my yells, sweeping like a prehistoric dream. Call the contractors, as the 'raptors are destroying what was once a lovely scene, so neat and tidy---it's frightening, such a blast, that rakes the past into a bloody heap.

I am the last Bashment girl, loaded with twirls and the teeth of dead pigs...around my wrists, and neck, a testament to this complex attire, re-wired and pinned bangles, ching with these arms, hand-clapping
you jig and stoke the fire
I bring

deep feelings

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

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1 posted 2006-09-07 11:08 AM

I am the tribal Queen, hear my yells, sweeping like a prehistoric dream. Call the contractors, as the 'raptors are destroying what was once a lovely scene, so neat and tidy---it's frightening, such a blast, that rakes the past into a bloody heap.

Brava, and yet this above, downright sad.
Anytime, beauty, the past is destroyed,
its sad...

Nicely done, Kif.

kif kif
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since 2006-06-01

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2 posted 2006-09-07 11:15 AM

Thanks, Gentle Spirit. I'm quite influenced by the re-make of King Kong, which I watched lately. That's sad, too...as is it's influences.

I suppose it's about dominion.

The Lady
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since 2005-12-26

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3 posted 2006-09-07 04:37 PM

"I bring

deep feelings"

I'll say you do
and well, too...
enjoyed

BloodyEclipse
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since 2006-09-07

Posts 16

4 posted 2006-09-07 04:41 PM

Perhaps I am too young to understand...
Cave woman?

Dublin Boy
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since 2006-08-26

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5 posted 2006-09-07 04:47 PM

This is excellent, Kif! A strongly-worded and intelligent piece of writing--I think it's great.

Cheers,
Bill

kif kif
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6 posted 2006-09-07 04:56 PM

Beauty and The Beast, lives inside me...

Probably not, Bloody Eclipse, you're right.

The Lady, I feel honoured you read---thanks for the compliment

Onelove.

kif kif
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7 posted 2006-09-07 05:00 PM

Ah, thanks, Bill. I'm on a hip-hop tip...anything goes! I keep adding, then taking away...there's a fine line between blathers. If I add anything else 'tho, I'll start a new thread.

jwesley
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since 2000-04-30

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8 posted 2006-09-07 06:33 PM

Kong LIVES! So does the Queen and her words...lively piece me friend...enjoyed much this read I almost never read!

j.

kif kif
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9 posted 2006-09-08 04:24 AM

Thanks jwesley. Yeah, the remake is fantastic! I was blown away

Dark Stranger
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10 posted 2006-09-08 07:34 AM

ms kif, a pleasure to see your dance
please continue it was enjoyed

kif kif
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11 posted 2006-09-08 11:56 AM

Yes, Dark Stranger...that's the intro'.

I'll have a breather before I launch into the rap...don't wanna lose my footing!

Thanks for enjoying

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