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DreamerSpirit
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since 2006-10-02
Posts 240
Buenos Aires, Argentina

0 posted 2006-10-22 05:38 PM



Thanks, as always, for replying to my poems,
thank you deeply.

Here we go,


I Need More Time

There are many things
i wish to tell you tonight
but i need more time

we've been talking
for a long time
i'm sure you've noticed
i wish to tell you
something else

there are many things
you will hear from me tonight
life, family, likes and dislikes
all we talk about when we meet
but i need more time
to tell you what i really want you to know
something that is new for me

i just can't find the words
i just can't find the moment
i don't know what to do
my time, is running

i need some more time
i'm sure you have already noticed
i'm sure you are already giving me
the time i need

but i just need more time
to tell you
those words
those important words
the most important words tonight
'i love you'

(For Yess..)


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TerryW
Senior Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 779
Louisville, Mississippi, USA
1 posted 2006-10-22 10:12 PM


Beautiful.  I think there is never enough time to do everything we need to do and say everything we need to say.  Loved it.

~you reached inside, you touched my heart,
and I am all the better for it~
Terry A. Woodson, Jr.

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