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MAVBEAR
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since 2006-10-19
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0 posted 2006-10-21 05:38 PM



                Wings

They say wings are as soft as the
New born baby whisper in sweet dreams
Some say they are as loud as the thunder
From a storm in full angerment
Yet others say comfort is given by the sound
Of the wings fluttering, and yet some say
Gawd can you just quieten it down a bit

I know of few wings it seems, but of the one
I know of well, they sing a song that is as
Lovely as the one that owns them, so well
She seems to speak, in a softness that can
Only be done with her wings so elegantly
For when she is in full slumber, even the
Music of the night, stands and listens to the
Music she plays,trying to learn how
To do this amazing fluttering that warms
Her soul

So I lay in contentment, and listen to her speak,
with the sound of the flutter of her wings,
As she softly moves just a little, her wings
Go quiet for a little, then once more as though
She knows there is a void , she once more plays
With this lovely musical harp she does so well

So my friends, when you hear what one says is
Annoying, think of this as the gift it is,
Far worse could be than the sound you hear,
For you just might here another ,
Your own instead,

Now let me tell you that is not a dream,
You will awaken from, but a self made nightmare Mothing worse than hearing oneself, to realize the Beauty of another wings fluttering..



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1 posted 2006-10-21 07:45 PM


OhMrPooh~
This is beautifully thoughtful, beyond compare~

You share the gift of great wisdom in your words~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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DreamerSpirit
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since 2006-10-02
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2 posted 2006-10-21 10:22 PM


Just excellent, i really enjoyed reading it..
thanks for sharing!.


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