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droppinginsideout Member
since 2006-08-04
Posts 54TENN |
you tell me not to worry about it. but every time i dont worry about it, i find out about it...from someone else. now tell me how this works... im told that nothing happened just to be told, everything happened? please bring me back what i used to know. knowing i could trust you knowing i could love you. because i cant. well... ya know what? dont worry about it. Ill go get these things from someone else. ~Jamison~ "feeling sorrow for all the things u had to steal and borrow, bring back the dates we had b4 tomorrow"-red jumpsuit apparatus |
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Edward Grim Senior Member
since 2005-12-18
Posts 1154Greenville, South Carolina |
First off, welcome to the PiP's. I tend to enjoy poetry like this. This style is more of a conversation than poetry which is the truest form of poetry in every sense. That probably doesn't mean anything but to make it simple, I liked it. Cheers Ed Once you are truly insane, it’s all picnics with Kafka after that. See, it’s the process of going crazy that you gotta worry about. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
I like the conversation of this too Jamison welcome... |
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Becky Mangrum Member
since 2006-10-18
Posts 56 |
Seems i've been there. Enjoyed it. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
welcome to Passions! enjoyed this poem and will be looking for more |
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