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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2006-10-18 09:27 PM



The Curve

wherever I go on life’s journey
I can stop look back and see
my footprints in a circle
that leads me back to you

“all romantics meet the same fate”…Joni Mitchell



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1 posted 2006-10-18 09:41 PM


funny how it works that way, huh?
Enchantress
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2 posted 2006-10-18 10:16 PM


*smiling at this*
Yes..it seems to be that way Helen.
Good one.
Hugs.

Autumn, the year's last loveliest smile~

The Lady
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3 posted 2006-10-18 11:56 PM



love is a circular kind of thing
huh?
I like this Helen


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4 posted 2006-10-19 02:11 AM


I like that alot, speaks truth for sure
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5 posted 2006-10-19 02:23 AM


Yep, that happens....may your circle be complete in happiness.  *hugs*...jo
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6 posted 2006-10-19 07:31 AM


OneSlick~
I've traced the retrace a time or two in my life~

Loving the all of this~

~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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7 posted 2006-10-19 12:51 PM


I hope your "happy circle" never, ever stops.
Martie
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8 posted 2006-10-19 03:38 PM


Helen...Life is like that...circles are my favorite shape!  
Edward Grim
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9 posted 2006-10-19 03:40 PM


Short and sweet, I like it. I've probably never told you this, but you are an extremely talented writer.

Once you are truly insane, it’s all picnics with Kafka after that. See, it’s the process of going crazy that you gotta worry about.

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