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Sarkany
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since 2006-10-14
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0 posted 2006-10-16 01:08 AM


Desire

In the beginning, from a single thought
Everything became that before was not
And in that instant of unfathomable desire
All that is; was forged into a ball of fire

Massive chunks of gaseous matter
Was flung in every direction from the glowing center
And in due time, following the cosmic plan  
Coalesced into solid forms again  

Thus, the stars and planets slowly became
From a thought of he, who has no name
All the many wonders that hence proceeded
Is because of what that thought created      

And the thinker who brought to be  
The existence of such exquisite tapestry
Had woven the essence of his infinite mind
Into all, that he so carefully designed  

[This message has been edited by Sarkany (10-16-2006 03:07 PM).]

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Juju
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since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429
In your dreams
1 posted 2006-10-16 01:15 AM


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Wow I had to take out my dictionary.  I hadn't done that in a while.   Well Done! I liked your theme and I was impressed by the flow of your poem.

-Juju

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thougts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silient all these Years, Tori Amos

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
2 posted 2006-10-16 07:13 AM


Smiling...
You weave a fine tapestry yourself.
Genuine good!
TD

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