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Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

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Canada eh.

0 posted 2006-10-15 06:22 PM

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Oh, I know a Land of Make Believe
Where, when my work is through
In twilight dim I steal right in
To roam again with you.

Away to the Land of Make Believe
I sail in my favourite chair
Still, I stand once more on the rocky shore..
And wait to meet you there.

The pools all shine like a silver lake,
It's here that my dreams come true.
For your face is mirrored in every pool
And I'm happy again with you.

Oh, that we might stay in Make Believe
With your loving hand in mine
As we wander love's enchanted lanes
...Until the end of time.

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Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

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Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2006-10-15 07:06 PM

OhSweetNanceOfEnchant~
This is positively gorgeous~

My Sunday evening *sigh*, that was waiting for a place to happen ... has found it's place~ *SIGH*

Delightfully beautiful~

I believe ... I believe ... I believe

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email - noles1@totcon.com

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

2 posted 2006-10-15 07:23 PM

Oh Nancy I love this. Can I go visit you land of make believe?

Klassy Lassy
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since 2005-06-28

Posts 2187
Oregon

3 posted 2006-10-15 08:51 PM

A friend told me very recently, if you dream it, you can have it. Those 'other' realities can be so sweet! You capture the magic of dreaming. And the magic of dreaming captured you, and us, too!

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

4 posted 2006-10-15 08:54 PM

Very very nice Nance....and I am certain
that was WS I smelled somewhere along the
way....

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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displaced

5 posted 2006-10-15 11:14 PM

a beautiful piece Nancy!

iliana
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since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

6 posted 2006-10-16 12:04 PM

This is so pretty, NancyLee. *hugs*....jo

The Lady
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since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

7 posted 2006-10-16 12:04 PM

I like your Land of Make Believe Nancy
I am afraid I would never come back
sigh...

scorpio
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since 2002-10-02

Posts 5178
right...there

8 posted 2006-10-16 08:48 AM

Such an uplifting poem Tinker. Your words of romance touched my heart. Shall we walk hand in hand through the Land of Make Believe?

believe in what your heart feels...

arthur
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since 2001-08-14

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england

9 posted 2006-10-16 02:10 PM

thats a great write nancy#
When do we leave?
arthur

skyshine

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since 2002-02-07

Posts 3058
Beneath the northern stars

10 posted 2006-10-16 04:41 PM

Make believe is so lovely....and so real, too....

sky

I hope someday you get the chance to live like you were dying....
~Tim McGraw

Snowflake From Hell
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since 2003-07-10

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My own little Icey Oblivion

11 posted 2006-10-16 05:21 PM

lovely as always

Swinging the Dead in this Free Fall you call life, Swinging the Dead on a Deathride

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

12 posted 2006-10-17 09:37 AM

~Thank you all very much for your great replies!~
Hugs & Love, Nancy

Autumn, the year's last loveliest smile~

Martie

Moderator

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since 1999-09-21

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California

13 posted 2006-10-17 11:29 AM

Nancy...what a beautiful song this would make!

HopeS
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since 2000-12-22

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Perth Western Australia

14 posted 2006-10-17 11:41 AM

Nancy beautifully expressed , I love the land of make believe , my imagination takes me there often

Hope

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

15 posted 2006-10-17 06:56 PM

Lovely...James

Goodknight
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since 2002-06-15

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Ohio, USA

16 posted 2006-10-18 12:17 PM

very sweet nancy - loved the feelings you evoke - paul

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light

17 posted 2006-10-18 12:49 PM

You are living up to your name, Enchanting One!

I can assure you that there were many a sigh uttered during the readings of this lovely penning! ~ and a few of them were mine!

Warm, autumnal hug,

Linda

Honeybunch
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since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

18 posted 2006-10-18 04:09 AM

Beautiful write, Nancy! Oh, yes, that land of "make believe" - how captivating it is until reality oils the palms and it slips through our fingers. But I sigh in longing!

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

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Portland, Oregon

19 posted 2006-10-22 08:57 PM

(sigh) Oh Nancy, this made me swoon and tear up because it is soooooooo beautifully dreamy and makes me think ever so much of my deam girl who I still dream ever soooooooo much to meet and kiss for the first time! (angel friendship hugs) How beautiful it would be if we could truly camp out in the land of make-believe as long as time itself, yay, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Nancy, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"If we have no peace, it is because we have forgotten that we belong to each other"

Mother Teresa

ivordavies
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since 2007-01-10

Posts 739
Chester, England

20 posted 2007-01-14 02:10 PM

Enchantress,

How fitting that the first poem I read of your is enchanting!

Why does it remind me of Edward Lear's 'The Jumblies', possibly because it sails away with my imagination and is very much in his perfect form and style.

I keep tripping over rhyming poets on this site, maybe I'll stay a while...

Have Fun,

Ivor

The moment created this second, is a moment that's going to last.
It lives the full spectrum of time, the future, the present and past.

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

21 posted 2007-01-19 10:41 PM

Nice...James

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