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Foxyoasis
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Atlantic Beach,Fla

0 posted 2006-10-14 01:16 AM



a broken heart is on the mend
but my soul fire and passion
has gone dead. the twilight
colors in your eyes dark and
red. bend my fingers to
the bone im all awake
and alll alone.

cry a foutain of endless
undying love tears
sweet memories
is all i can hear

words were said that should
not have beeen i paid the price
in the end.

thought i got it
right this time
now i think i lost him forever
and thats a life i can no longer bare

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


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passing shadows
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displaced
1 posted 2006-10-14 10:12 AM


ouch
Foxyoasis
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since 2003-06-10
Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla
2 posted 2006-10-14 01:50 PM


yay he isnt mad at me

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2006-10-14 09:30 PM


Know this feeling...I am trying to replace my words of criticism with words of acceptance...James
Foxyoasis
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Atlantic Beach,Fla
4 posted 2006-10-16 02:32 PM


i know i got misspellings and some stuff but it was written outta rage and pure saddness.

appreicate your acceptance

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


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