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Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2006-10-13 07:25 AM



you wore tiptoes to the gallery
but the artist was behind you
and below the gaze of your gods
that always needed your worshiping

my hands prayed at the fountain
you kneeled your sins there too
and laughed at what we had
in common when it was moistened

we shared a chair back with elbows
and were mutually nonchalant
with our eyes in the stairway
where the hollow was welcome warmth

a place to rest the wondering
if not for a lifetime, just a moment
where you could unravel your gown
and I could pretend I didn't notice

the confident flavors of your mangos


_______________

daark

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passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
1 posted 2006-10-13 07:34 AM


I do still read you and I am usually left without a comment so I don't even bother to say

but I wanted you to know
I am here
I am fascinated

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
2 posted 2006-10-13 07:48 AM


ms dixie, you still bless me with your eyes, thank you for letting me wear them
for these moments

The Lady
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634
The Southwest
3 posted 2006-10-13 10:55 AM



ripe mangos are delicious Stranger
I like...


Martie
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4 posted 2006-10-13 11:46 AM


DS

"a place to rest the wondering
if not for a lifetime"

you say you found this macys?  Sounds lovely and without a price tag.  

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
5 posted 2006-10-13 03:01 PM


ladyone, thanks you hon

___________

ms martie, macy's drive thru..wink, thanks little neighbor

DragonStar
Junior Member
since 2006-10-20
Posts 13
Michigan, USA
6 posted 2006-10-20 10:38 PM


Very nice! I enjoyed it immensely! Thanks!

Love and Light, Blessed Be!!!

Kelly

'Do not follow the Path. Go where there is no path and begin the trail.' -Ashanti Proverb

seraphin
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since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004
Michigan
7 posted 2006-10-20 11:49 PM


dark, dark, dark!

I REALLY need to find that parking lot!

ohhhhh my!

Sandra

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