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Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

0 posted 2006-10-10 07:29 AM

Western shores calling
Sand, surf, where creatures share
Grainy smooth with time

Some say, she left her heart there
Where shadows had skimmed the brine

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Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

1 posted 2006-10-10 08:56 AM

Karilea, this is so very beautiful. Hugs mommak.

CraigM
Junior Member

since 2006-10-05

Posts 13

2 posted 2006-10-10 09:13 AM

Lovely

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

3 posted 2006-10-10 09:26 AM

ms sun, the shapes of things we see at the shore, lovely spend of moments ms

Martie

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

4 posted 2006-10-10 10:06 AM

             Sunshine

She feels like a poem
covered in pearls,
lost in a meadow
or ocean of furls.

Taken down into soft sand
by sun wind and sea,
glinted by moon light
protected by trees.

Whistled by gypsies
with dancing  bare feet,
laughed into good humor
feeling so sweet.

Listen the poem
whose cadence is rich,
pull thread through her daydream
and take the first stitch.

DreamerSpirit
Member

since 2006-10-02

Posts 240
Buenos Aires, Argentina

5 posted 2006-10-10 10:33 AM

Excellent. No more words. Excellent.

Titia Geertman
Member Ascendant

since 2001-05-07

Posts 5182
Netherlands

6 posted 2006-10-10 05:27 PM

And when the sea returns
Her heart will silenced
Till next time's revelation

You knew I just love this beautiful photo and matching words.

Like scattered leaves...my words will flow

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

7 posted 2006-10-10 07:02 PM

Very pretty my friend (although...the picture reminds me of a mouse...LOL)

j

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

8 posted 2006-10-10 10:16 PM

something about a shore that always holds a heart indeed

The Lady
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since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

9 posted 2006-10-10 10:44 PM

"Some say, she left her heart there
Where shadows had skimmed the brine"

so easy to leave your heart
at the shore
Karilea...
but we need it here
beautiful

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

10 posted 2006-10-10 11:02 PM

Oh my, this is so beautiful.

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

11 posted 2006-10-12 02:44 AM

Beautiful, indeed.

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

12 posted 2006-10-12 07:47 AM

just beautiful

ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

13 posted 2006-10-12 08:17 AM

I think I might have found a favorite...although, that would be part of a long list of your works Kar.

Perfection here.

Kira Aso
Member

since 2006-09-26

Posts 351
Closer to Hell...

14 posted 2006-10-12 10:04 AM

So lovely...

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

15 posted 2006-10-12 04:57 PM

I hear that beckoning, too... it's never completely silent, is it? *S* Beautiful!!

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

16 posted 2006-10-12 05:29 PM

Enjoyed....James

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

17 posted 2006-10-12 05:46 PM

nice read

playing.with.crayons
Member

since 2006-01-02

Posts 362
Neverland

18 posted 2006-10-14 10:42 AM

Oh Sunshiny One
your words do not grace
these blue pages
enough.

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