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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest 
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in toledo el Greco paints again spring is an explosion de flores of flowers fiestas Spanish cielo sky absorbing life viejo cementerio weeds so tall I beg my way through to find what I don’t want faded gris verde blanco gray green white stone shaped like my heart letters faint mi picare mi padre mi barco mi amor my rogue my priest my boat my love en ese mismo momento la memoria at that very moment the memory speaks blando cantando soft singing aquí miente tú vida tú corazón here lies your life your heart small toes peeking dark eyes that know the reason I am in Spain Maria Isabel steps from silent grief con rosas white and pink y con dos besos two kisses one for each cheek it bleeds your heart si? llore cry mi dama es bueno es su razón it is good it is your reason para españa for Spain ven aqui muchacha come here girl but la niña is gone Moorish Spring of Tears seizes my throat still even in Spanish I cannot cry |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Beauty shines in your work. It is purely poignant and your words wrap around me and hold me as I read. a |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
thank you for your kind reply aziza |
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JLHunter Senior Member
since 2006-10-08
Posts 557CA United States |
Hi, TL, " here lies your life your heart... ...still even in Spanish I cannot cry" Purely magical...heartbreaking but magical. Also, intertwining the two languages, Spanglish, if you will, gives the whole write a distinctly lyrical quality. Well done, a beautiful write. John xo Pinky: Gee, Brain, what are we going to do tonight? Brain: The same thing we do every night, Pinky: try to take over the world! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ladyone, the gypsy of your eyes is lovely in this, fragile sounds |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Yes, A gypsy is the heart, a gypsy. The mood here lay beautifully beneath the sunset sky. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
this poem is my heart JL thank you for your comments I appreciate you… Kate xo thank you Stranger for knowing the fragile of this... TD thank you for sharing my gypsy mood dear lady |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Kate you are a kindred spirit, free like a gypsy. Loved this brush of ink from your pen lady. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Donna indeed we are kindred spirits I always appreciate your words thank you so much dear lady... |
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seraphin Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004Michigan |
You are at your best, and she weeps not alone. Sandra |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
thank you for your sweet words and tears Sandra... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
dang!! that last line...whew! |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
thank you so much Dixie! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
A splendid write Kate! Have a very Happy Birthday!  Autumn, the year's last loveliest smile~ |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Lady I remember my Spanish words with sky and love, and yes, the heartbreak. Lovely, emotive and lyrical, this. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
thank you for your sweet reply Nancy and for the birthday wish…  thank you so much Martie for your kind reply |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Lush...James |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
James that's such a lovely word thank you... |
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