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Open Poetry #39

A Little Piece Of Mind

Nikerlz
Junior Member

since 2006-08-31

Posts 37
California

0 posted 2006-09-01 02:15 PM

I make my way to heavens gate

Even if it’s a dream come late

I walk

To heaven

And God comes to judge

Saying

You’ve never had a creed to believe

Always of equal worth

Dignity

But no trust in the night

So God has a conference of angels

And they say

Despite your intelligence to believe

You were always born to see

No matter the difference

I lived in your thoughts

Teaching

And I accept what you’ve sought

Walking through heavens gate

We all make it through the angel fate

latearrival
Member Ascendant

since 2003-03-21

Posts 5499
Florida

1 posted 2006-09-02 05:31 AM

This along with the last one shows growth, and faith. You will have a good life because as trite as it may sound, "Life is what you make it". You have within you the ability to honor your father's life and help it to shine forever. Respectfully, martyjo

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

2 posted 2006-09-02 10:06 AM

Great write!

Ceinwyn
Member Elite

since 2000-07-09

Posts 2175
VA

3 posted 2006-09-02 07:52 PM

I hope you find my reply sincere but this gave me goosebumps...in the arms of the angel may you find comfort there...this speaks to me..

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

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