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Goldenrose
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since 2003-05-30
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0 posted 2006-06-18 05:22 PM


Woodland,
defused shade.
I close my eyes,
stygian shadows lengthen,
a slither
of light,
an iris
of amber,
elongates,
thrills my inner being,
my world
remains grey-blue,
like a
dense woodland,
where nothing grows
upon its
shade haunted
earth.

[This message has been edited by Goldenrose (06-19-2006 10:58 AM).]

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Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
1 posted 2006-06-18 05:34 PM


Something I know about. Very captivating write. It's the aperture that brings salvation.

Awareness of inner beauty changes the world.

Love,
Margherita

passing shadows
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displaced
2 posted 2006-06-18 05:46 PM



Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
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Canada eh.
3 posted 2006-06-18 06:16 PM


A most wonderful write Phil.
Great use of imagery.
Hugs~Nancy

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain ~

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

4 posted 2006-06-19 10:34 AM


Phil, your writing has become intense with visuals...strong with feelings, and thought provoking examples...enjoyed
jody5
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since 2005-12-21
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California, U.S.A.
5 posted 2006-06-19 12:37 PM


Beautiful Picture,  Nice write.


Huggs Kimberly


Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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Realms of Light
6 posted 2006-06-20 05:57 PM


Your pen is mighty, whether it be Light or Dark ink that flows from it.



Linda
Flower

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