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Open Poetry #38

Standardized (bluse based sonnet)

themute
Member

since 2006-05-08

Posts 469
Maryland

0 posted 2006-06-17 10:21 PM

Standard, this thing is oh so standardized
You got this woman you got it so much
I’ll tell you woman looking in your eyes
I’m gonna love you girl with every touch
But the way I been mistreated baby
You know honey that loving just aint right
You got me so blue woman but maybe
I said maybe I gets me into a fight
Cos all my pain just a makes me mad
Get me some drink, and get me some ladies
They’s a whole lot o’ loving I can have
I’m gonna get my fill I aint lazy
Now play that song a hoochie koochie style
Cos I want love a hoochie koochie while

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2006-06-18 12:07 PM

grinning here
some blues fun, eh?
good to see you

Will Rhyme
Member

since 2006-05-22

Posts 149

2 posted 2006-06-18 12:18 PM

enjoyed!

Will

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