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Open Poetry #38

Eye Of the Beholder

Will Rhyme
Member

since 2006-05-22

Posts 149

0 posted 2006-06-17 10:01 PM

The "I" of the beholder...
glassy bent stoned;
the riddled stare told her
was time to go home.

Dad's yesterday dishes,
left clean in a row...
sparked of her sweet wishes
and kisses
in tow.

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2006-06-18 11:04 AM

sparked of her sweet wishes
and kisses
in tow

Love leaves the sign of its passage, always.

Beautiful!

Love,
Margherita

marcel
Senior Member

since 2003-03-02

Posts 660
az, usa

2 posted 2006-06-19 07:55 PM

sounds like one loved harder than the other....subtle in its strong expression..

Will Rhyme
Member

since 2006-05-22

Posts 149

3 posted 2006-06-19 07:57 PM

Thank you...both of you!

Will

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2006-06-19 08:32 PM

wow Will
I am amazed at this...a short write but very powerful

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2006-06-19 09:11 PM

Excellent write!!!

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain ~

scorpio
Member Ascendant

since 2002-10-02

Posts 5178
right...there

6 posted 2006-06-19 09:12 PM

I enjoyed this write.

believe in what your heart feels...

Will Rhyme
Member

since 2006-05-22

Posts 149

7 posted 2006-06-19 10:36 PM

And...many thanks to all!

Will

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