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openthoughts
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0 posted 2006-06-17 01:01 AM


One Moon's Grace

The moon said to the stars
in its glowing majesty
"you would not be as bright
if it were not for me"
This quieted the stars
who learned humility
and the moon now smiles inwardly
for everyone to see

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Jess
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1 posted 2006-06-17 01:10 AM


I love this poem! It has a moon, stars, and a little story. That does it for me!
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2 posted 2006-06-17 07:22 PM


OpenThoughts~
Oh my ... write the moon ... you've got my rapt attention~

I am 'moon' and THIS is lovely~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

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3 posted 2006-06-17 08:27 PM


I love poems about the moon...
This one is especially lovely.
Hugs~Nancy

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain ~

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