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When did I first notice you?
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When did I first notice you? |
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CastleGuard Senior Member
since 2003-04-30
Posts 760Alberta, Canada |
When did I first notice you? I can’t quite Recall - was it by a bubbling forest brook? Or perhaps near a serene seashore bright? All I know the ground beneath me shook. Maybe when you wore that summer dress And warm breeze caressed you hair my fingers Yearned to feel, my form to yours would press - Oh, that sweetest yearning!- Still it lingers... Still it lingers, that yearning for your kiss... But how your beauty binds I never knew - Till your soft embrace spelled a divine bliss. Oh, Woman, when did I first notice you? I really can’t recall, but this I find - You've never left the province of my mind. CG |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
Wonderfully reminiscent! -Bob |
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CastleGuard Senior Member
since 2003-04-30
Posts 760Alberta, Canada |
Thank you, Bob. Yes, still lingers....  CG |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 lingering is good |
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CastleGuard Senior Member
since 2003-04-30
Posts 760Alberta, Canada |
Yes, it is.  CG |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
oh, what a warm emracing memory ~love~ |
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