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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2006-06-15 07:49 AM


from the waterfalls of our minds
I brought you pretty sounds
in a sand man's basket with silk

you were in a hurry room
and slowly tore the pocket
of my look back shirt

you were afraid of the windows
and how your skin would feel
touched by new fingers

but you wanted you to know
that there were more rivers
and that a woman there is more fun

than the lady here with her mirrors
______________

daark

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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
1 posted 2006-06-15 07:52 AM



Cats come soon
to croon and cry
memories...

how simple you
make it seem...

thank you, sir...


Dark Stranger
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2 posted 2006-06-15 08:23 AM


is is seamless ms sun..thank you
Marge Tindal
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3 posted 2006-06-15 08:56 AM


Dark~

Okay ... so I just happen to like it ALL !!

'from the waterfalls of our minds
I brought you pretty sounds
in a sand man's basket with silk

you were in a hurry room
and slowly tore the pocket
of my look back shirt

you were afraid of the windows
and how your skin would feel
touched by new fingers

but you wanted you to know
that there were more rivers
and that a woman there is more fun

than the lady here with her mirrors'


*sighs* at your word talents~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
4 posted 2006-06-15 09:25 AM


ms T..you make me smile, thank you sweet lady for the eyes and the likes
inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
5 posted 2006-06-15 02:40 PM


mirrors are meant to be shattered......

lord make me a mirror
so the dark one
can shatter me

you give me the giggles

Pilgrimage
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since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945
Texas, USA
6 posted 2006-06-15 04:43 PM


Mmm, yes I can see this one.  Nicely done.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

Klassy Lassy
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since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187
Oregon
7 posted 2006-06-16 03:04 AM


hmmmm...mirrors, they do have a way of making one reflect...


The Lady
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since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634
The Southwest
8 posted 2006-06-23 05:40 PM




"you were in a hurry room
and slowly tore the pocket
of my look back shirt'

my look back shirt

oh how you turn words
and heads


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