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Open Poetry #38

Stealing Moments (Act one)

Thomas119gold
Senior Member

since 2002-06-03

Posts 708
Biloxi, MS (city by the sea)

0 posted 2006-06-15 03:37 AM

My love

I write to only you
So that you hear what is true
Each second of the day
I try to find the way

The path to your heart
Is not the difficult part
It is the agonizing wait
Not wanting to be late

Because our love is hidden
Expressing emotions quietly by words written
We are stealing moments
Without any true judgments

Our love is to large to be contained
I no longer want to refrain
But stand on mountain tops and scream
That loving you is my one true dream

But I stand silent
As you are patient
Until the day
I can walk away

Finding our path
And no longer worry about the wrath
The day I become an honest man
The day I no longer steal the moments that I can

[This message has been edited by Thomas119gold (06-15-2006 09:42 AM).]

riet
Junior Member

since 2006-05-12

Posts 19
Australia

1 posted 2006-06-15 04:29 AM

This is a wonderful heartfelt poem.

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

2 posted 2006-06-15 05:35 AM

stealing the moments ...

I understand that one
Enjoyed your words and love the honesty in it.

M

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2006-06-15 07:54 AM

Thank you for inspiring
nakdthoughts...

Thomas119gold
Senior Member

since 2002-06-03

Posts 708
Biloxi, MS (city by the sea)

4 posted 2006-06-15 09:37 AM

Thanks for the read

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2006-06-15 11:12 AM

An excellent piece of writing..
and a beautiful inspired write by Maureen.
Hugs~Nancy

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain ~

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2006-06-15 11:14 AM

a hand-in-hand piece of art

Lighthousebob
Member Elite

since 2000-06-14

Posts 4725
California

7 posted 2006-06-15 01:20 PM

I could truly feel the pent-up emotions in your words here. Good job.

-Bob

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