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Snowflake From Hell
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My own little Icey Oblivion

0 posted 2006-06-14 03:11 PM


All my life I've had one dream,
Nobody wants to listen so I just scream.
Trying to catch this dream so I can stand,
Learn to crawl without a helping hand.
Dreamcatcher rescue me before it's too late,
Before I end up in front of Hell's gate.
I'm running down this dream,
Pretending to shine on and gleam.
Never would come to me,
Never will let me be.
Dreamcatcher rescue me before it's too late,
Before I end up in front of Hell's gate.
Dream slowly slipping out of grasp,
Held together with a broken clasp.
This body my holding cell,
What's left only time will tell.
Dreamcatcher rescue me before it's too late,
Before I end up in front of Hell's gate.
And I had a dream,
Now I silently scream.
Dreams aren't meant to be,
Well at least...not for me.
Dreamcatcher come rescue me,
Rescue me from this tainted life.

Hollow heroes seperate as they run...Shadows linger in your pain dead and done

© Copyright 2006 Kyle - All Rights Reserved
Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
1 posted 2006-06-14 03:37 PM


"A dream is a wish your heart makes..."

Hi Kyle...good to read you!
This really sounds like a song..
have you put it to music?

Remember, only you can make your dreams come true.

Excellent write.
Hugs~Nancy

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain ~

Snowflake From Hell
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since 2003-07-10
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My own little Icey Oblivion
2 posted 2006-06-14 03:42 PM


ha no i dont put my writes to music itd be like a death metal love song but thank ya
ChaoticHazeLight
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since 2006-06-13
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California, U.S.
3 posted 2006-06-14 04:27 PM


This was very sad...
Good write.
Dreamcatchers don't catch dreams for us
We have to catch our own.

- Haze

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Member Patricius
since 2001-08-31
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just out of reach
4 posted 2006-06-14 04:33 PM


All my life I've had one dream,
Nobody wants to listen so I just scream.


I'll listen! What's your life's dream?
It is never too late ya know.

hugs, Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
~Carl Sandburg

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