No More Honey To Take My Money

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Open Poetry #38

No More Honey To Take My Money

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2006-05-22 07:46 PM

No More Honey To Take My Money

She used to take my change from
the jar on the breakfast bar.
And I used to think it so cute.
Now there's no more honey to take my
money and I miss her being cute for me.
And the money stays in the jar
upon the bar, awaiting the
softness of her touch.

JamesLee
May12
2006

miscellanea
Member Elite

since 2004-06-24

Posts 4060
OH

1 posted 2006-05-22 08:02 PM

James,

This really tells how we miss the simplest action of someone we love. I really like your poem a lot! The last line was the icing on the cake.

miscellanea

poettothecars
Senior Member

since 2006-02-10

Posts 1093
New Zealand

2 posted 2006-05-22 08:03 PM

this one has beauty, an interesting read

a poet who cares

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