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Debo
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0 posted 2006-06-13 06:17 AM


Boy what a loss
Oh man what a chilt
If onlyI would have
Done things differently
You say to yourself.
But your heart knows
The truth much better then you.

Debo

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passing shadows
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1 posted 2006-06-13 08:46 AM


so true! I love this!
Jess
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2 posted 2006-06-13 01:25 PM


It does,doesnt it? Dont you wish it would tell us sometimes?
Debo
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3 posted 2006-06-13 06:39 PM


Thanks guys for the great replys.
Jess I wish that it would warn me all the time but life just don't work that easy.
And maybe if it did we might just get bored

Debo

JamesMichael
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4 posted 2006-06-13 07:59 PM


They say the answer is right there, but we want to search for it...James
Debo
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5 posted 2006-06-13 11:14 PM


Yes I must agree with you James
I have always heard follow your heart.
But sometimes my head will not let me.

Debo

Will Rhyme
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6 posted 2006-06-15 03:22 AM


Indeed it does!

Nice work,

Wll

Debo
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7 posted 2006-06-15 09:59 PM


Thanks Will and indeed it does as I qoute from you.

Debo

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