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icebox
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in the shadows

0 posted 2006-06-12 11:30 PM





hot strawberry moon

raging weaving sleepless dreams

shines without mercy

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iliana
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1 posted 2006-06-12 11:37 PM


Mr. C., after reading the poem, I found myself wanting to continue the title with..."that I don't already know."  The doc is probably right.   ....jo
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2 posted 2006-06-13 12:04 PM


I like it.
Jess
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3 posted 2006-06-13 01:13 AM


"hot strawberry moon" delicious and lovely all at once! A very nice haiku.
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4 posted 2006-06-13 01:16 AM


Made me think of a hot, humid summer night, with tortured thoughts running through the mind....well done!

~sky

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5 posted 2006-06-13 01:31 AM


good one once again
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6 posted 2006-06-13 02:26 AM


Some nights are absolutely relentless.... Very succinct and well written images tug at my spirit.  ~ Klassy  
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7 posted 2006-06-13 02:26 AM


Because there are no answers. Love your stuff! martyjo
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8 posted 2006-06-13 10:21 AM


icebox.....yep, I like this!

Moon or no...nights without sleep preclude reason.  I've had no moon, only light rain at night...but still can't sleep.  

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