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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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today I wonder of you there between the lines when you don't say things but still they show on you like my hands dipped in dark then touching your proper light and would you blush at the prints where and how they appeared after you opened your eyes and saw the strangers in our mirrors pretending they were us well beyond introduction or would you just smile and dip my fingers in your mind giving them handfulls of maybe while you unbuttoned my mystery and let it fall slowly to your ceiling _____________ daark |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I almost reposted a falling up poem today... but yours is better... tender lovely. Good morning, Sir. |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"today I wonder of you there between the lines when you don't say things but still they show on you" and now I know what I am missing...  Nice to read you Mr.D..."too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
you make me gush dark slush when you whisper gyrations |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms sunshine, thanks lady!!! ________________ ms susieC, I appreciate your eyes Thanks muchly ________________ ms inky, your flavors soothduce me, thank you |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
DS "or would you just smile and dip my fingers in your mind" Yep....I think there's room in there now.  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms martie.. well let me fill the space with new imaginations..thanks ms |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Must you struggle to those brillig phrases make or do they to you simply come? |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
missed you |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
lady ms..they come I guess..kinda just ooze out, thanks for the reviews _______________ ms groves, ditto ms, thank you |
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