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Bodger
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since 2005-06-12
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Tolerance for a short time

0 posted 2006-05-21 09:52 PM


I'm sorry, I blew it

Want'd to write a song

And the song

was right

But for me

I'll write the song

After that

Your own minds make up

As I am only allowed three bits of

someone else

'Do you read the adverts on this site'

Wrung on a right arm

Ethelright

Dave

Do you believe that a woman can have such a sound that without thought

You know that sound

Can you believe that there are woman and men

Who never love again

Can you believe a world apart

Never seen nor torn apart

Never met

Nor

Do you believe

Do you believe

End of this set of words

And I am freelancing and brain just dictating fingers

Dave


It is that song

Didn't mean to write this

I wan't of words that make the whole world glad

Reality gets in

Dave Page


Boy Soldier

The drums were beating hard that day
Barefoot I marched along
Lost in the magic
Dreaming to the song
Never known a good day
Nor meal or rags to fit
Barefoot over cobbles
Marching time with my stick

Winter blowing
Softly hard
Feeling
O so grand
Patrolling through the yard
Guarding my grand stand

A few more years
I join
Wear a decent coat
Fill up my belly
Until it stops at my throat

Smartly marching in the rain
Rifle by my side
Clean uniform for life
To be so satisfied

Cheers echoing softly
Kisses flustering by
Boys follow as we march
The ladies
By and bye

We board the boat
Flags are still
In the empty chill
My warm coat
Seems to bring naught but ill

My face is in the earth
My feet are digging too
The sky is flashing light
My stomach flashes too

No one else is left
I hid within my tomb
Digging all I could
To see my mother’s womb

No one came back
But I hear marching feet
I look at the steel at night
Can someone beat retreat

I wait for that death
Dishonourable I know
It doesn't matter how you die
It just matters how you go

I have no qualms for my coward's life
I've lived it all I could
I started at the bottom
With the heroes right on top

When the killing came
They all felt they should stop
So they sent us out poor souls
To make it to the top

With all their fancy words
Our senses bemused
Told us we were heroes
We would get what we deserved

Now we are all dead
But they still breed anew
They raise their glasses up to us
And bloody heroes too.

© Copyright 2006 Dave Page - Cirencester UK - All Rights Reserved
Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2006-05-21 11:11 PM


let them be the first to go
then
if they come back
and can still sip
without leaking through all
the holes in their bodies
well
I'll tip my glass, too

war stinks



Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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Realms of Light
2 posted 2006-05-22 12:23 PM


Far too often our brave heroes have their own blood in goblets instead of the wine that they deserve...


Linda
Flowers

Martie
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3 posted 2006-05-22 01:59 PM


Dave

"I wait for that death
Dishonourable I know
It doesn't matter how you die
It just matters how you go"

Wise words....and yes, war stinks!!


froggy
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since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893
Michigan
4 posted 2006-05-23 10:37 AM


I agree with all those before me.
War Stinks.

:-)

Until he extends the circle of his compassion to all living things,
man will not himself find peace."

Albert Schweitzer,
Nobel Peace Prize Wi

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