»
Archives
»
Open Poetry #38
»
composted hearts (senryu)
| Open Poetry #38 |
|
composted hearts (senryu) |
|
Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia 
|
Green raw emotions Mix dry kindled memories Composting two hearts |
||
| © Copyright 2006 Kathleen Kacy Stafford - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
Edward Grim Senior Member
since 2005-12-18
Posts 1154Greenville, South Carolina |
You say a lot in three lines. Many people who read my poetry think of me as an absurdist and as a person who enjoys nothing but the odd and strange. But I still have a soft side. This poem hits it. Thanks. - Ed I'm not smart, I'm just a tricky dumb person. |
||
|
Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
grin odd and strange=unique and special thanks for the visit! |
||
|
Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautifully said Kacy! Hugs~Nancy ~ Trace my body with your words, |
||
|
Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
thanks Nancy (is that little girl OK?) |
||
|
Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
LOVE this - beautiful!  Melissa~ Intellectually I know that Canada is no better than any other country. Emotionally I KNOW that Canada is the best country in the world! |
||
|
themute Member
since 2006-05-08
Posts 469Maryland |
never thought of the idea of raw being linked to green but it works effectively, changes my perspective on stuff, thanks. |
||
|
froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan |
A beautiful read Kacy. :-) Until he extends the circle of his compassion to all living things, |
||
|
The Shadow in Blue Member
since 2006-05-18
Posts 493EL, Michigan |
I never could write so much in just 3 lines and for that I bow down to the master.  |
||
|
iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Good one, Kacy! |
||
vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good read  |
||
|
Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Hmmm! Never thought of love that way ~ but you have a way of putting your own uniquely creative spin on everything you write! Very nice penning, Kacy!    Linda  |
||
|
LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
kacy, what play on words, enjoy this extermely vivid... |
||
|
Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
nutrition, volition, voila` I like your recipe! ~ Klassy |
||
|
Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
So is that a bunch of crap or what? See! You do that to me all the time. Love you, mean it. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, |
||
|
Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Thanks to each of you for commenting! Even you, Larry.  |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
