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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2006-06-04 09:02 AM



I've seen through better eyes
this weakness
lending itself to worry
more than often imaginary.

Sitting amongst the empty
holding onto leftovers,
the reminders of ease,
when moods could weather and
still be understood.

First times are beginning again,
but morning glories
withhold their blooms' openings
waiting for the last dews drying
and the sun's glow to once again
warm their core.

Clinging to the known, a life-line vine,
with more climbing to do,
feeling divided, wanting to revert
to a more colorful hue
when days were
"yesterday"...

I've seen through better eyes...


M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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Walter Poe
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1 posted 2006-06-04 09:28 AM


Like the beatles "Yesterday" it says to me

I believe in yesterday

I went to the desert on a horse with no name, it felt good to get out of the rain.

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
2 posted 2006-06-04 09:31 AM


Maureen,
Enjoyed your thoughts.

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
3 posted 2006-06-04 09:34 AM


Thanks Walter and Sy for stopping by...
Yesterday's always seem better for some reason (guess our minds make us forget the troubled times)


M

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4 posted 2006-06-04 11:24 AM


I do agree M.  Yesterdays do seem better
when we have washed from our minds those
moments we care to forget.

Bodger
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5 posted 2006-06-05 06:25 PM


I'm not sure that your words mean would people think.

Jaundiced look of life from others was how I took this

Dave

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displaced
6 posted 2006-06-05 11:58 PM


yeah I understand
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