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Kimberly ann Member
since 2006-05-29
Posts 61 |
So today was fun but what about tomorrow. No one knows whats going to happen tomorrow or the next. So you’re always wondering if something good or bad is going to happen. To you or someone you love dearly. You’re excited about whats going to happen later on. Wondering if you're going to get hurt. Or get a great person who has as much love as you do in your heart. Everyone can't wait until tomorrow but what if tomorrow isn't what you excited. And something bad or good happens. All your decisions you make can change your future. What you do today can change who you are tomorrow. |
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poettothecars Senior Member
since 2006-02-10
Posts 1093New Zealand |
What you do today can change who you are tomorrow. This is by far your best line, and what makes the spirit of a poem, is often the last line. Enough to be touching and have the reader think (or left to think about the words expressed) a poet who cares |
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