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Open Poetry #38
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Will Rhyme
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since 2006-05-22
Posts 149
0 posted 2006-06-02 01:21 AM


Send the wind into a corner
send the sun away
send the spirit way up-younder
but, please remeber,

always REMEMBER:

it is , you

YES "YOU"....doing the  sending!
© Copyright 2006 Will Rhyme - All Rights Reserved
Brian James
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since 2005-06-26
Posts 147
Winnipeg
1 posted 2006-06-02 01:53 AM

Too much caps.  And uh, not enough implied caps...
Will Rhyme
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since 2006-05-22
Posts 149
2 posted 2006-06-02 01:58 AM

Thanks,

so much Brian,
so glad that you pointed out MY mistakes.

Will
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