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Open Poetry #38

Hopefully My Sweetheart

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2006-05-31 09:41 PM

Hopefully My Sweetheart

If I could care for you
I would share with you
the feelings from my heart.

And I could hold you
and kiss you and grow to
love you, my sweetheart.

JamesLee
May30
2006

"Hope-When it seems you will never
smile again, life comes back"...
Dr Linda Andrade Wheeler
writing about life from
her heart.

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2006-05-31 09:50 PM

always such sweetness from your pen James

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2006-05-31 10:54 PM

sweetly said

Debo
Member

since 2006-04-18

Posts 321
Texas U.S.A.

3 posted 2006-06-02 02:34 AM

I just love your open loving heart that you spill on to this paper.

Debo

Will Rhyme
Member

since 2006-05-22

Posts 149

4 posted 2006-06-02 02:39 AM

"If I could care for you
I would share with you
the feelings from my heart.

And I could hold you
and kiss you and grow to
love you, my sweetheart."

Ummmmm, now...

speaking as a man who, whom,

after 50 years of trying to please women, I say TRY again Sir!

Keep Writing...Practice, practice, Practice.

Will

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

5 posted 2006-06-02 06:55 AM

agreeing here with will, adding a great big smile for support...lovely write James...

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