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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260Tolerance for a short time |
Does a touch In sorry days When it was required Now yesterday When I failed to Touch you Now I fail In the midst of a cauldron steam When washing up Was a dream When together We would conquer mountains Now your look And the bank I am counting |
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Liz Sinclair Member
since 2006-05-06
Posts 93Atlantis |
(hehehe) I love the cynicism in the piece. I rather like brooding, facetious moods. This one is busting at the seams with it. Thanks for sharing. Take care, Liz...Carpe Diem |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
"When together We would conquer mountains" Love that line!! Another great write. JL  |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Now your look And the bank I am counting nice one M |
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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260Tolerance for a short time |
I'll do it by the line on comments and it is on the fly so spelling goes as well Dave Does a touch (allowed fingers) In sorry days When it was required (just hold me) Now yesterday When I failed to Touch you Now I fail In the midst of a cauldron steam When washing up (found the wrong person) Was a dream When together We would conquer mountains (stuff they put in old fashioned laundry machines) Now your look And the bank I am counting (24 miles away, no electrics, no water, and no car and you can't get there to get the money) dave |
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