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To the (Not So Unknown) Lover
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To the (Not So Unknown) Lover |
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amepoesie Member
since 2006-01-19
Posts 63Canada |
Long, long ago, I opened my eyes. Through eons of time, I beheld sunrise. ‘Twas quite the amazing view: I could see the most superb you. Lamblike was my presence in your life, Obliterated was I through our strife, Valued, yet, you have been, and Eternally will my heart crave your hand. Blustery weather went my way. Cloudbursts tugged at my heartstrings. Sic transit gloria mundi, as they say. My wasteland was my powerlessness. Where are you now? Do you have wings? Do you still feel mine, nevertheless? Will fragrances from the past catch you, Or are your accounts for ever overdue? My own soundtrack I have composed. The notes were simple to find, unclothed. Will they ever be known someday, Or will they endure, silent, out of the way? Let the child in me rise once more, Overpowering my hate for ever more. Verily, your absence disturbs me, and Exhorts me to seek God’s homeland. Long, long ago, I fell in love with you. Through aeons of time, I learnt to forgive you. ‘Twas quite the journey, as they say: We might give it a try again someday. Where are you now? Do you have wings? Do you still feel mine, nevertheless? Will fragrances from the past catch you, Or are your accounts for ever overdue? Unsound in mind and body, I may be. But, wondering and loving, that’s just me. So, I shall never close my eyes. Never will I stop beholding sunrises. For you made me see the light, And that’s the way love should ignite! Winnipeg, Canada, May 31, 2006 Cendrine Marrouat |
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skyshine 
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
Yes, it should....well done!  ~sky I hope someday you get the chance to live like you were dying.... |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
yes it should, and they say, if it doesn't the first time, you can never go back... powerfully hypnotic write... |
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amepoesie Member
since 2006-01-19
Posts 63Canada |
Thanks! I really appreciate that! Cendrine Marrouat |
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