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Tom Zart
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0 posted 2006-05-30 10:30 PM



SHOULD TOMORROW START WITHOUT ME


Should tomorrow start without me
Remember I love you.
Looking down from up above
Seeing everything you do.

If I become a casualty
I pray you will love again
Whom ever makes you happy
I’ll consider my friend.

Should tomorrow start without me
Remind our boys, God loves all who care.
And when life seems too harsh and cruel
With “Him” they must share their prayer.

I have proven I’m not a coward
Who breaks and runs to survive.
Always fearing death will kiss me
As the streets of Baghdad I drive.

Should tomorrow start without me
Be proud I choose to serve.
Our faith and our patriotism
Earn the freedom we deserve.

I miss home more than ever
It breaks my heart to stay away
I can’t help but want to hold you
And whisper what I say.

My God bless America
And all, I love,
”YOUR MARINE”


By Tom Zart
Author of
LOVE WAR AND MORE


© Copyright 2006 Tom Zart - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2006-05-30 10:52 PM


We pretend the song is trite, oh just a used-up military marching song -- but I know no one it doesn't move, including the ones who don't want it to move them... and truly, there is no prouder title than US Marine...nor one more worthy of thanks.

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2 posted 2006-05-31 12:52 PM


May tomorrow NOT start without you or any of your fellow heroes!

- Owl

Tom Zart
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3 posted 2006-05-31 09:07 AM


Thank you for your kind words of support.


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4 posted 2006-05-31 11:08 AM


This is so touching I have no words.. but Thank you,  martyjo
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5 posted 2006-05-31 12:36 PM


WestportPoet~
It's a pleasure to read you here~
Thank you, Tom~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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6 posted 2006-05-31 02:37 PM


You feelings and words are excellent

You join an Armed Service and that is the point at which you give up your life.

In the UK I was a Killick in the Royal Navy;  something - an iron box appeared and all the officers and petty officers disappeared.

Cut the story short, the married guys had cut through the fence to the married quarters so they could stroll down without going through the main gate.

The armed services for them were a good income and that afternoon, I was looking at a hole in the fence;  on an IRA alarm at a metal box and we hadn't been trained.

Your words brought this back to me, because people have to realise the Services are no 'easy option'

Thanks for your words

Dave

Tom Zart
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7 posted 2006-05-31 04:05 PM


Thanks to Dave and those before you for your wonderful words of support I can't
say anything but = Thank you,Thank you
from the bottom of my heart.


Martie
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8 posted 2006-05-31 04:59 PM


A touching poem, Tom...thank you for you service!  May your future be well!
JamesMichael
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9 posted 2006-05-31 08:55 PM


Enjoyed reading these well placed words...James
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10 posted 2006-06-07 09:29 PM


It is because of you our soldiers that I can stand and say what I feel. I am proud to be an American Girl. There is no where else in the world where I as A woman am treated the same as a man. Thank you to all our soldiers.
What a wonderful poem

Debo

Tom Zart
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11 posted 2006-06-07 10:04 PM


Thanks to everyone for your words of support for my works.
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