navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #38 » From the Mist
Open Poetry #38
Post A Reply Post New Topic From the Mist Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
Liz Sinclair
Member
since 2006-05-06
Posts 93
Atlantis

0 posted 2006-05-29 11:37 PM



From the Mist

  
I danced among the clouds,
surrounding myself in the
aromatic whisper of the
flowing breeze.

Ripples of sunlight
cascaded before me
and glistened like diamonds
upon the downy illusion
of the billowy mist.

Every movement, every stride
sparked a passion of color,
like a blushing prism embraced
within the folds of lingering kiss.

I closed my eyes and
inhaled the tranquility.
It possessed my very being,
and cast my essence outward...

Where I rained upon the ground,
waiting for the birth of my soul.

© Copyright 2006 Lizette Sinclair - All Rights Reserved
Earth Angel
Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
1 posted 2006-05-30 12:01 PM


I enjoyed every aspect ~ and every line! ~ of this fine piece of 'mist'ical poetry.

A very appealing read!

Love & Light,

Earth Angel
Flowers

Nightshade
Deputy Moderator 5 ToursDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Patricius
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962
just out of reach
2 posted 2006-05-30 12:02 PM


Every movement, every stride
sparked a passion of color,
like a blushing prism embraced
within the folds of lingering kiss.

Oooh, I like this very much.

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
~Carl Sandburg

Midnitesun
Deputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Empyrean
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647
Gaia
3 posted 2006-05-30 12:24 PM


Liz, thank you for this misty moment.
passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
4 posted 2006-05-30 07:56 AM


beautiful!!
Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #38 » From the Mist

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary