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Bodger
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since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260
Tolerance for a short time

0 posted 2006-05-29 03:56 PM


As I sit me down, in often words that rhyme
I take the absuse the ringing rhyme
As I again fail

To meet my design 'mind' in writing to my own kind

Yes I know about the daffodils
As your mind links to me
What have yellow flowers to do
With my thinking

It is the hardest winter
In your freezing all you find
I am here in cold
Mind you every winter
Summer is usually kind

Three coals have behold
And it is only just your words

And you plan and dispute
On anything
That you think
Can be heard

So
As I lay me down to bed
I pray the spread
Will average
The heating's cost

Because every day

An Economist's Loss



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Earth Angel
Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
1 posted 2006-05-29 04:08 PM



Dave, I am sending,
Sunny daffodils your way,
To brighten and warm,
The dreariest cold day.

Flowers  Flowers  Flowers  Flowers  

Warm hug,

Linda
Flowers

Bodger
Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260
Tolerance for a short time
2 posted 2006-05-29 04:28 PM


The nice thing about writing

Is that in some countries

It still seems to be free and uncontrolled

Wait for it!

Wait for it!

dave

Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049
California
3 posted 2006-05-29 06:36 PM


Dave....
some times it is hard to understand your meaning so I'll just say, maybe when it is so cold, it is hard to think of what the warm can bring?  The flowers here are now, the heater off.  

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