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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2006-05-29 07:24 AM



Promises Promises

Waiting for that sign from you
the one that lets me know
no matter where or how I am,
I'm in your mind's eye show.

Dressed today in teal and black
comfortable, at ease
thinking when and where the show
and if that time, we'll seize.

Another day, more moments pass
without a compromise
waiting for that sign from you
Anticipation ~~sighs~~

( **just having some fun**)
M


"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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poettothecars
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since 2006-02-10
Posts 1093
New Zealand
1 posted 2006-05-29 10:46 AM


while I cannot really explain, the line that captured by eye was: "Dressed today in teal and black"

At one time the airline of "Air New Zealand" was known as T.E.A.L or Tasman Empire Airways Limited. The Tasman part being named after the Tasman Sea, on the west coast of New Zealand. With the Pacific Ocean on the east coast.

While black is the national colour of New Zealand and what all the sports people of my country proudly wear in international sporting events, like the Olympic Games.

so maybe I did explain or attempt to, what "Dressed today in teal and black" means to me

Thanks for the journey

a poet who cares

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
2 posted 2006-05-29 12:07 PM


Thanks, teal  and black are my favorite colors...and I am just hanging around today
(too hot outside) watching memorial services.

M


Bodger
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since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260
Tolerance for a short time
3 posted 2006-05-29 04:00 PM


You for me are the most direct romantic poet

It is like Laser

Down the back

And the head

"Please enter you own words"

They will not be recorded

(yes taking fun)

Dave

Will Rhyme
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since 2006-05-22
Posts 149

4 posted 2006-05-29 04:10 PM


enjoyed this very much.

Will

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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Realms of Light
5 posted 2006-05-29 04:16 PM


With beautiful you all dolled up in teal and black ~ you're sure to find some fun somewhere! Hey Sexy

Flirty 2



Linda
Flowers

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