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Neotec
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since 2006-08-22
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0 posted 2006-08-31 09:51 PM


A friend cought
In between
Trying to understand
Two friends
Who should be loving
Each other
Not fighting
Hurting.

Unable to help
With kindwords
Not knowing
What to say
To help them
Love each other anew.

One lost and confused
The other in pain.

A friend cought in between.


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miscellanea
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since 2004-06-24
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OH
1 posted 2006-08-31 10:13 PM


This counds like my day, Neotec!  Nice poem!
Thanks,

misc

The Lady
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since 2005-12-26
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The Southwest
2 posted 2006-09-01 12:57 PM



hard spot to be in Neotec
nice write...

Neotec
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since 2006-08-22
Posts 112

3 posted 2006-09-01 01:03 AM


yes, to bad its a friend of mine

FNG
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since 2006-02-07
Posts 477

4 posted 2006-09-01 04:13 AM


a difficult position, in between..

short and telling

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

5 posted 2006-09-01 08:51 AM


not a nice place to be...don't cha hate it when people put you in the middle of things and they think you should take sides?

well done

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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Realms of Light
6 posted 2006-09-01 11:05 AM


You have a kind and compassionate heart!

Perhaps if you keep sending each of them your love, they will eventually love each other again. Love is contagious!

Loving Light,
EA

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