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The Shadow in Blue
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since 2006-05-18
Posts 493
EL, Michigan

0 posted 2006-08-29 04:58 PM


The Whisper from the Shadows


I am the whisper that lingers

in the wind

the smile

and the tears

that lye behind your eyes

the spark that ignites the flame

of desire and raw passion

that boils in the blood

making your heart

tick


I am the ground that you

walk upon

the dirt

from beneath your feet

sifting like sand

kicking back dust

by bringing up memories

of times gone by

with days from past

repeating itself


I am the shadow that lurks

in the corner

the remains of the doubt

that ruin lives

confusing the mind

while silently laughing,

the dark side of the moon

that dances in

the dark

it's devilish jig


But more importantly

I am a person

just like you

full of insecurities

but fighting none the less

for acceptance

at best

I am the whisper

that lingers in the shadows


© Copyright 2006 Jill Slamka - All Rights Reserved
Bonnie j
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since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588
Ohio
1 posted 2006-08-30 08:07 AM


Love your title. It has a cool, refreshing sound. That whisper may kiss your cheek then fall back into the shadow of time. If I keep this up I'll have a poem, also. LOL
Good jobber
Hugs
BonBon

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Deep in the heart
2 posted 2006-08-30 11:22 AM


1derful write!

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

The Shadow in Blue
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since 2006-05-18
Posts 493
EL, Michigan
3 posted 2006-09-01 06:48 PM


Bonnie j-Thanks for the comment and hope that start of a poem will do you good one of these day...lol... ^_^

Interloper-Thanks for taking the time to read my humble poem.

I'm taking my own chances to find truth between the lies.
Its kinda like just what it is.

http://www.myspace.com/theshedevil05

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