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Dave Romantic |
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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260Tolerance for a short time |
Did currents of our eyes burn echoing schoring me in a sensation of fire reigning in regions of fire, firing flames in me that has me checking the latest in superstore under ideas Did you fireproof that look as you took my body and soul in a glance in in Did people move aside for us, did they like rivers parting leave to allow us to enjoin to couple in eyes minds time in time ))))))) Writing this stuff out of my head and going for it, does limit the words Genuine This stuff was written as I look at a blue screen and made up as I write Dave Page |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"Did you fireproof that look as you took my body and soul in a glance" I really liked that line.  |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
yes, that line is an eyegrabber what SEA did see  and yes, the waves parted if only for a short moment the walk across the distance was real |
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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260Tolerance for a short time |
Thanks Sea I am now heading back to the Simon and Garfunkel stuff Dave |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Dave Romantic When one feels this way....it would seem that everyone does pay attention and step aside. |
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froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan |
I agree with all those before me. :-) Until he extends the circle of his compassion to all living things, |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Are we ever fireproof from romantic flames ? Hope |
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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260Tolerance for a short time |
Off the cuff as usual reply Love and romance seem's an early middle maybe "if you have money" , later middle and of course The Lawyer's friend, if they didn't manage to get in the middle, but with always those friends, cl(0000000000000000 dollars,pounds - want some laundery done)ose friends You wonder how many people can you buy or sell Dave |
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