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WindWalker
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since 2001-10-12
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0 posted 2006-05-28 11:26 AM


The answer seems obvious yet is not:
for all things originate in pure energy
yet all things created transmute energy,
thus no longer ‘pure’

Conceptually difficult to realize
for you and I are things also
and although they called it
“made in the image of God”
now we are but ‘things’ and no longer
do we comprehend the transition
we underwent:
and this they called “the fall of man.”

See a flower: is it pure energy?
No.  It is now only a child of Earth
and of the seed from which it sprung.
All a part of the cycle of life in difference.

Pure energy creates the material;
determines the mind realms:
all of it is still pure energy
all of it fuelled from its Source
but now there is the ‘thing’
which would stand as a contradiction.

Life is an imponderable; a mystery.
In her mists she hides many shores of reality;
full of secrets, unknown even to herself
yet she does know everyone of her children.

© Copyright 2006 Sharran WindWalker - All Rights Reserved
Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115
South Africa
1 posted 2006-05-28 11:57 AM


It's the "everlasting" energy that is the mystery - bodies die, flowers die, but the creative mind (pure energy) can't possibly.  Mind creates, life decimates the physical, and mind must then recreate. A never ending cycle, for sure.
Enjoyed your thoughts!

Liz Sinclair
Member
since 2006-05-06
Posts 93
Atlantis
2 posted 2006-05-28 10:23 PM


A great philosophical piece.  You could retain this in essay form as well.  It would be just as effective.  Thanks for sharing.  Take care.  Liz...Carpe Diem
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