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Neotec
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since 2006-08-22
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0 posted 2006-08-22 09:14 PM


There she sits
All golden and shining
Hair a brownish gold
Eyes aflame with haxel fire
A smile that brings hope to the heart
A goldness goddess
Alight with the flame of love
Lost in the darkness of time
Looking for a love as bright as her's
Off in the darkness
A lone light shines
Brighter, and brighter if becomes
Closing on her she see's a man in the light
He holds his hand out to her
She see's his heart in the light
Togather in time they leave the
Darkness behind.

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Gentle Spirit
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1 posted 2006-08-22 09:15 PM


Oh, this is so very beautiful! Nicely penned.  
Neotec
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since 2006-08-22
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2 posted 2006-08-22 09:25 PM


thank you. it is a thought on a love that is not in my life but hoping she comes back.


lol names Chris

Justbleu
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since 1999-08-31
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Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)
3 posted 2006-08-24 09:50 AM


Beautiful writing!!!!
Welcome to Passions!!!!!

Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Andre Brink


Earth Angel
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4 posted 2006-08-24 10:15 AM


How romantic! How lovely! How full of Light!

Giving you a warm, welcoming hug,

Loving Light,

Earth Angel

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