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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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6th grade boy in a ghost town zoo where the dogs died from drinking water my only friend had brown eyes and black skin and distemper dad shot him dead but let me hold him while he dug him a hole in heaven under the russian cypress tree the only woman I knew was an 8th grade girl with granite eyes and a grave stone name she was asphalt I was gravel then walking from school she was the wind laughing at me for playing with myself but I did anyway because it felt good and she never could be that handy again I hear her often now on the hell side of 50 when riding too fast on unknown's hiway she prefers to run beside my mind says it is too predictable behind still laughs at my hands but understands says someday she will help me with that and that the engraving will get her off perhaps tomorrow I will ride a bit faster ______________ daark scribblenote: rewind of mind tapes, while pressing my face into a familiar wind..just a hair faster than a slow bullet |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Thank you for the ride down the highways of your mind and memories. This is, with out a doubt, in my mind.....your best ever babe.  Kudos and kisses. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
well, seems like you and I are running by each other's minds again this morn...sorta yes, I agree, this is superb writing... upon clicking on your name, I'm always ready for the story to jump out at me like a whole different matrix projected in front of me like a movie... outstanding D.!!!! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms gs, thanks ms, I appreciate your touch. _____________ ms leej, thanks lady friend, for the walk up and look in |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
she prefers to run beside my mind ~*~ Now there's a ghost of no escaping...  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms sun, thanks lady friend |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
asphalt burns and gravel slides back in time the race that hides galing winds of jaded notion tempest tossed, no gentle ocean |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms kl...just the motionless of notionless..thanks ms |
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seraphin Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004Michigan |
A touch different, but with your same touch. As always, wonderful. Sandra |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
Still waters run deep illusion of quiet repose but whispered depths that never sleep is what your ocean knows  |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Dark, chuckling at this one...You do have a touch with words, oh yeah! |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
this one is truly outstanding you are a poet for sure Stranger... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms sandra, thank you little lady ______________ ms kl, you do read between the lines thank you for the moments here _____________ bro' mag, thank you guy for the review, ______________ lady one, thank you for looking over the edge |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Well done  Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
DS When you ride that road of truth, there is no one that can beat the impact.  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Int'l, thanks for the review friend ______________ ms martie, thanks lil neighbor |
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