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Open Poetry #38

What I see now

Foxyoasis
Senior Member

since 2003-06-10

Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla

0 posted 2006-08-21 02:13 PM

right now i see you
in my eyes the steel color
of the glass of dreams

shattered once scolded
and beaten and torn it
was you who stayed and
stayed on.

for with you life is greater
then it has ever been at least
now i have someone to look forward
to spending the rest of my life
with.

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

1 posted 2006-08-21 05:57 PM

Enjoyed...James

deasomnians
Member

since 2006-06-20

Posts 87
California

2 posted 2006-08-21 05:59 PM

I love this! The way the lines are broken up is at first strange but, on a second read, really adds to the tone of the poem.

"Nature has implanted in our minds an insatiable longing to seek the truth" - CJCL Convention Theme 2005

Foxyoasis
Senior Member

since 2003-06-10

Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla

3 posted 2006-08-22 10:42 AM

thanks been having a rought health time again lately sigh

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....

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