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aziza
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since 2006-07-09
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Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!

0 posted 2006-08-19 06:37 PM


I know about hidden calories
I know just what they are
I hide them in my basement
I hide them in my car.
They lurk around every corner
Just waiting to attack
I conquer hidden calories
In every tasty calorie-laden snack
Hidden calories are persistent
They never want to leave me be
So I hide them in my tummy
And I carry them secretly
You might think that you see them
But you don’t and I’ll tell you why
I have tucked those hidden calories
In my butt and in my thighs
So, I know about hidden calories
I know just where they are
They are hiding in my basement
They are hiding in my car.

aziza

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Lighthousebob
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since 2000-06-14
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1 posted 2006-08-19 06:58 PM



My favorite lines were:


quote:
I have tucked those hidden calories
In my butt and in my thighs


Big Smiles.


Yes, I do believe that this is a most sobering reality concerning those darn hidden calories.

Enjoyed reading and God bless.

-Bob

sandgrain
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since 1999-09-21
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2 posted 2006-08-19 07:09 PM


Such a cute write!  It's a keeper.

    Rae

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