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crimson tear
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since 2003-06-07
Posts 76
Massachusetts

0 posted 2006-05-27 05:26 AM



Dial your number
Just to listen to your voice on the machine
Makes me remember
how much i love you and how much you mean
To me

Since you came into my life
The sun's shined brighter
than i've ever seen before
since you came into my life
i have all i need
theres nothing to pray for anymore

I fall asleep
Just to dream of you
You make me weak
But i don't want to be strong again

Wake each day
thoughts of you ringing in my head
You mean more than words can say
At least more than any i've ever said

You're the moon in my nights
The sun in my day
You're that brightly twinkling star
On which i used to pray
You're the one i want
Forever so for now
I'll send you these words
Across the distance
You're the one i love
Til the end of existance.

Good day to be alive sir, good day to be alive he said - metallica

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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
1 posted 2006-05-27 06:26 AM


Dial your number
Just to listen to your voice on the machine
Makes me remember


a very warm felt poem...enjoyed it

M

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
2 posted 2006-05-27 05:47 PM


I relate

nice poem, I like it

Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA
3 posted 2006-05-27 06:11 PM


"Dial your number
Just to listen to your voice on the machine
Makes me remember...

I fall asleep
Just to dream of you
You make me weak
But i don't want to be strong again."
___________________________________________

A relatable poem - especially the above lines. Well expressed with swooning sincerity.

Melissa~

Intellectually I know that Canada is no better than any other country. Emotionally I KNOW that Canada is the best country in the world!

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