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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2006-05-20 09:18 PM



Independent Agents


What happens
when you start
holding on too tight?

You might start thinking
that they belong to you...

and they don't.

They are their
own independent agents...

and if they have
to leave you
to convince you,
they sure as
hell will.


JamesLee
May10
2006



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Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2006-05-20 09:21 PM


a basic truth
that is sometimes
hard to accept

hello James

Margherita
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Eternity
2 posted 2006-05-21 04:49 AM


... the mutual learning process.

It's comforting after all to discover that we begin to understand that we can't "possess" anybody.

It's always about unconditional love and this learning process can last for a long, a very long time ...

Your psychological writings are important.

Love,
Margherita

Bodger
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Tolerance for a short time
3 posted 2006-05-21 05:05 PM


Sounds like you are learning

Dave

Bodger
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Tolerance for a short time
4 posted 2006-05-21 10:04 PM


James

If I can make it

In honesty unknown

There is that feeling in me

The rabbits

Can go home

Dave


picturegramic
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5 posted 2006-05-21 11:07 PM


Don't hold too tight just tight enough.
Be your own person. Noone can own another!
A good messaged write.

picturegramic :)

Earth Angel
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6 posted 2006-05-22 12:26 PM


If the butterfly is free to go, you will know it truly was yours to love if it flies back.

aloha hugs,
Linda

JamesMichael
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7 posted 2006-05-22 07:40 PM


Thank you Midenitesun, Margherita, Bodger, picturegram and Earth Angel for the nice responses....hard to let go of someone you want to stay...she goes with my blessings...James
poettothecars
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8 posted 2006-05-22 08:05 PM


so true to life, and a message many will understand - thanks

a poet who cares

vandana
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9 posted 2006-05-22 09:50 PM


enjoyed
Debo
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10 posted 2006-06-01 07:12 AM


You said a mouthful right here and I liked it good write

Debo

LeeJ
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11 posted 2006-06-01 07:41 AM


hmmmmm, I wonder if they leave to convince you or if perhaps they feel like they are suffocating, or a little of both?  

Good thoughts to ponder Michael.


vandana
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12 posted 2006-06-01 07:24 PM


good read
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