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Enchantress
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Canada eh.

0 posted 2006-08-02 02:11 PM



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We are like a field
of wild flowers
unpollinated
swaying against the wind ~

Dew sparkling..buds bursting
we await the drying day.
Let's not gain the notice
of the woman
with the large straw basket.

Autumn will come
anyway...
Let us continue
our dance
beneath the sun.

.

© Copyright 2006 Nancy Lee - All Rights Reserved
artexeres
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1 posted 2006-08-02 02:20 PM


a lovely flow of poetic dance through the meadows of our minds thank you for a lovely read.
Martie
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2 posted 2006-08-02 02:27 PM


Nancy....I am a sun girl....so I really do appreciate your poem for that, as well as the beauty of the poem itself.  It's 78 degrees here right now....wonderful!  
LeeJ
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3 posted 2006-08-02 02:48 PM


oh boy, the natural beauty of this was stunning...Nancy, thank you always for writing and sharing....lovely thoughts
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4 posted 2006-08-02 04:03 PM


wonderful!  
passing shadows
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5 posted 2006-08-03 02:19 AM


beautiful!
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6 posted 2006-08-03 01:27 PM


iDearestLadyoftheKindestHeart~
Your beautiful pennnings leave us breathlessly envious of your talent~

I adore the all of this~
*sigh*

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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Deep in the heart
7 posted 2006-08-03 03:34 PM


Marvelous, Enchanted One!

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Sunshine
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8 posted 2006-08-04 11:36 AM



Lovely...

as hot as the heat has been this last month,
this slightly cooler day gives lift to the need

to dance, and dance well...



Happy Birthday, Girl!


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9 posted 2006-08-04 12:23 PM


Just an enchanting write, but that is to be expected!  Happy Birthday to you Nancy Lee, you are indeed a special lady.
the quell
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10 posted 2006-08-04 12:27 PM


Great work
scorpio
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right...there
11 posted 2006-08-04 02:41 PM


Love the images you created in this write Tinker!!

believe in what your heart feels...

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12 posted 2006-08-04 03:12 PM


As always... You enchant me.

HAPPY BIRTHDAY !!!!!!!!!!!!!


((((((((N)))(((A)))(((N)))(((C)))(((Y))))))))

The Lady
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13 posted 2006-08-04 05:19 PM




"Let's not gain the notice
of the woman
with the large straw basket."


shhhhh... I think she missed us

let's just bloom and celebrate

Happy Birthday Miss Enchantment!


Enchantress
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Canada eh.
14 posted 2006-08-04 10:14 PM





~Thank you all for reading and the warm replies~

Goodknight
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15 posted 2006-08-06 09:34 AM


you write this very very well Nancy - loved it - Paul
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16 posted 2006-08-07 09:02 AM



Welcome August...
the last kiss of summer...

Good morning, Enchantress.

I shall see what I can do
about staying awhile...

muses are so fickle, you know.

arthur
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17 posted 2006-08-13 09:37 AM


long may it continue
arthur

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18 posted 2006-08-13 04:15 PM


How very lovely!!! *S*

For you, for this... I'll let the next flowers I see continue their dance instead of harvesting them for my selfish enjoyment. *S*

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