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Rick
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since 2001-06-21

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Victoria, Australia

0 posted 2006-07-27 07:13 AM

Life is a journey that’s ventured to be
The good or the bad that you want it to be
Much better the journey when you have a friend
To share the adventure until it might end

When you join as a couple to love and to care
The journey becomes one of learning to share
To not hold your secrets; to be both as one
Enjoying each other till each day is done

Giving the gift of your laughter and joy
Telling each other of things you enjoy
Taking the time to listen and see
How wonderful life spent together will be

Remember a kiss every morning and night
Remember your past as the future you sight
May the words that I love you be shared everyday
To find then the hard days just vanish away

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

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Listening to every heart

1 posted 2006-07-27 07:23 AM

A lovely wedding gift...

and a heartfelt treasure to keep.

Rick
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since 2001-06-21

Posts 2903
Victoria, Australia

2 posted 2006-07-27 08:05 AM

My dear friend, thank you for your reply, I just wrote it for friends of mine that are celebrationg their engagement, I do hope they like it. Great to see you here tonight, have a great week.

Sincerely
Rick

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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3 posted 2006-07-27 10:21 AM

I'm sure they will LOVE this! I know I do!

You've such a warm heart.

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

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Canada eh.

4 posted 2006-07-27 10:28 AM

"Remember a kiss every morning and night
Remember your past as the future you sight
May the words that I love you be shared everyday
To find then the hard days just vanish away"

Beautiful words which hold much truth Rick!
Very lovely indeed.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

For it was not into my ear you whispered
But into my heart..
It was not my lips you kissed
But my soul.

aziza
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since 2006-07-09

Posts 2995
Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!

5 posted 2006-07-27 10:47 AM

You are so perceptive. So talented. And, yep, I do like this. And I also like sentence fragments (can you tell? grins). Good writing, Rick.

aziza

Munda
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since 1999-10-08

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The Hague, The Netherlands

6 posted 2006-07-27 11:22 AM

I absolutely enjoyed this poem and what it says. Well done!

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

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Florida's Foreverly Shores

7 posted 2006-07-27 11:52 AM

Rick~

'When you join as a couple to love and to care
The journey becomes one of learning to share'

Amen to the beauty of your wisdom~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email - noles1@totcon.com

Rick
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since 2001-06-21

Posts 2903
Victoria, Australia

8 posted 2006-07-28 06:41 AM

Hi Dixie, I do hope they will like it my friend, thank you for the reply, nice to see you here.

Nancy, good seeing you here, thanks for the reply, always enjoyed.

aziza, you make me blush, but thank you so much for the wonderful comments and reply.

Munda, good seeing you here my friend, thank you for the reply it was indeed appreciated.

Marge, amen to your reply and kindness, great having you visit.

To you all my friends, again thank you all very much, you make an average day turn into a wonderful day.

Sincerely
Rick

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