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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2006-07-26 07:28 AM



three fingers jacked
beyond the brim side smile
of some hollow god of glass

alley brother swaggers
are staggers to the blind man
who listens to boots

and cry mouthed girls
in women skin dressups
waiting for caddy men

to whisper green lie uh-huhs
and leave the finger prints
on window shopping complexions

long enough to be forgotten


_______________
daark


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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
1 posted 2006-07-26 07:32 AM



The images you stir
in a glass lid pond...

even the loon cries...




LeeJ
Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

2 posted 2006-07-26 09:25 AM


sheesh, again we're on the same wave length this morning...how do you do that?

sad story isn't it,
but as always, you bring them so close to home in such an uncanny art that you possess

was wondering about LA?

Morning D



bel1e
Senior Member
since 2006-07-24
Posts 1631

3 posted 2006-07-26 10:04 AM


a color snapshat of a moment ~ like ink on skin

thanks for the peek within~

seraphin
Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004
Michigan
4 posted 2006-07-26 11:03 AM


Once again, I am impressed. You have an awesome talent, and I remain barely keeping envy at bay.
Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
5 posted 2006-07-27 07:17 AM


humble thanks to each of you

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
6 posted 2006-07-29 03:49 PM


you make the sinners regal
and rightfully so  

The Lady
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634
The Southwest
7 posted 2006-07-29 11:44 PM




oh
those cry mouthed girls
in women skin dressups...
how DO you do that stranger?
sigh...


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